Playing God
Here I was tasked with writing a reader response paper about Frankenstein, by Mary Shelley, and it had to be no less than 600 words. I fear fast growth of technology in our culture and society, I have what is called a Frankenstein Complex. So when I wrote my reader response here about Frankenstein, I am sure you could figure out what stance I took. I personally just do not think that people should be allowed to decide what can became a new living creature, that is, something that God did not create on his own. And what happened in Frankenstein was so very avoidable had Dr. Frankenstein just not created the Monster.
Final Draft
Here a had a few comma mistakes that I needed to fix and I had a few sentences that were phrased awkwardly that I changed. And my teacher left a note about not using block quotes and to find what I really wanted to focus on in the quote, but I decided to keeping them because I think that they both complimented my paper very well.
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Second Draft Here I took all of the different edits that were made to my paper on my peer review and added them and or changed what needed to be changed. I did not really do all that much when I edited it I kept most things the same.
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Well I think this picture is pretty self explanatory, but it’s it is not, this is a picture of Dr. Frankenstein’s “Monster”.
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Rough Draft/ Peer Review
When I sat down to write this I knew exactly what I was going to say. In fact I wrote this all in one sitting without any breaks, that is how genuinely passionate I am about my hate of those who like to “play God”. It was not difficult for me to meet the word count as I just kept writing until I felt satisfied with myself. I even referenced my celebrity crush, Channing Tatum, because I figured this was my only opportunity that I would have been able to write his name in an important paper and actually get a way with it. So that is exactly what I did.
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Rough Draft and Peer Review | |
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